Pharaohs

__**​Learning Objectives:**__
 * able to write a narrative using the characteristics of a narrative
 * able to write using correct grammar and spelling
 * able to revise, edit and proofread peer and own work


 * __Assessment Criteria:__**
 * the narrative has the correct characteristics
 * grammar and spelling is used correctly
 * the writing process has been used when doing your narrative
 * you have edited and commented on your group members' work
 * refer to the narrative scoring guide to ensure you establish a clear context and your events and details support the context

__**Task:**__ **Imagine you are an ancient Egyptian boy/ girl. Write about your life based on one of the following topics:**
 * **The Day My Slaves Ran Away * When My Father the Pharaoh Died * How I Began Life as a Peasant and Became a Vizier**
 * **Life as an Inventor in Ancient Egypt * My Life as the High Priest to the Pharoah * The Day I Got Very Sick**

**Remember that although this is a narrative, you must have your basic facts about Ancient Egypt accurate. Think also about how gender plays a part in your narrative e.g. can a female be a Pharaoh?** **Please use a colour that you have chosen as your own within your group. When you edit or comment on your classmate's work, please use your own colour and write your name so we can see your contribution. Write your narrative under your group name below.** 1. Mummy Runners

2. Wonderful Egyptians My life was very rich and I was needed to help the pharaoh because he was the most powerful one in ancient Egypt.When I finished work I went back home to sleep, my home was very big and inside had many gold and money.

3. Super Egypt

When My Father the Pharaoh Died

Today was a great happily day.!My dad, Pharaoh Chan died! I am so glad about that. I saw many people were mummifying him! I was so excited, because I can be the pharaoh!! I would not be control by my father anymore! I could eat all the delicious and famous food in Egypt, I can play any games ,I wanted in Egypt!!Ha~ha! In these days, I was very happy and could do any things I want! Until one day, few priest caught me in the jail! They said that I am just a little boy and didn’t have the power to control the whole Egypt and they would choose another new pharaoh now. Since on that day, I tried a lot of difference ways to escape from the jail but it all no use. Soon the new pharaoh got me out from the jail and he ask me to be his slave. I didn't know what I could do,at last,I escaped successfully, I ran as fast as I could, then I found a small lake!Near the lake I found a little small house! I don't know what I could do. Now I think that my father died was a super bad thing, I though that it should be a good thing at first. Now I need to live in this place just because my father died. I felt very sorry! By Thomas&Lawrence

4. Scorpions

5. Pharaohs The day I got very sick

Last monday I got a stomachache.So I went to the temple to see the priest.He told me to sit down.Then he started to say some spell,but I didn't know what was the priest any thing.Then he gave me some medicine,I thought the medicine was drank.But the prisent said that it was poo!!!!! I was very frightened,and he said I need to put it on my head!!But I remenber that I am sick.So I just did it. After I saw the priest,I feel better then before and I was very happy that my stomach was not pain any more!!! By alex

6. The Sphinx

The day I got very sick.

Yesterday was my bad day,﻿because I got a fever. So I went to the temple and find the priest, the priest asked me to sit down on a chair, and started to say something. I didn't know what was he talking about, I thought it was some magic spells. When he had finished the spell, he gave me a bottle of black things and asked me to put them on my face. I asked him what it is, then he told me that this is the medicine made with 16 different kinds of poo.I thought t very disgusting, but I still needed to put them on my face. And now, I got well.^^ I feel so happy but I don't know why. Maybe it's because the "disgusting medicine".

By:Timothy Yau Eunice Ng